tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7109148405669867264.post7276822469675722376..comments2023-10-31T06:23:26.747-07:00Comments on TJ and Rita's World: Edit the Ego Out of Your Work, Part 4Rita Webbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15705211010768041660noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7109148405669867264.post-85596376701999346542010-07-08T21:52:24.468-07:002010-07-08T21:52:24.468-07:00Excellent points, Rita. Another thing to watch for...Excellent points, Rita. Another thing to watch for is the use of pronouns where the antecedent isn't clear.<br /><br />Eg.,"Pat and Mike went swimming. He took off his shoes and stashed them under his beach towel."<br /><br />Okay, maybe I exaggerate, but I see this often and watch for it in my own writing.<br /><br /> JeanneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7109148405669867264.post-83989466337932507312010-07-08T17:40:52.442-07:002010-07-08T17:40:52.442-07:00Good information. Especially number 2 and 3. As I ...Good information. Especially number 2 and 3. As I go back now and read what I just edited to make sure. Thanks.Author Susan Griscomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14437469871283911057noreply@blogger.com