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Review: Beauty and the Werewolf by Mercedes Lackey

Synopsis from Amazon:
The eldest daughter is often doomed in fairy tales. But Bella—Isabella Beauchamps, daughter of a wealthy merchant—vows to escape the usual pitfalls.


Anxious to avoid the Traditional path, Bella dons a red cloak and ventures into the forbidden forest to consult with "Granny," the local wisewoman.


But on the way home she's attacked by a wolf—who turns out to be a cursed nobleman! Secluded in his castle, Bella is torn between her family and this strange man who creates marvelous inventions and makes her laugh—when he isn't howling at the moon.


Breaking spells is never easy. But a determined beauty, a wizard (after all, he's only an occasional werewolf) and a little godmotherly interference might just be able to bring about a happy ending.

My Thoughts:

Is this the story of Beauty and the Beast? Or is it Little Red Riding Hood? Bella learns that some forcewill be stuffed into some story whether she likes it or not.

Loved Bella! She was down to earch and practical and caring and in the course of a month she turned a dead and hopeless house into a bright and happy home.

The wolf--the reclusive duke--is just marvelous...though not what I've come to expect from werewolves. He's certainly not the alpha male type. He's too sincere and sweet for that, but I love the way he babbles when he's uncomfortable and often puts his foot in his mouth.

I don't know if author Mercedes Lacky meant to, but she definitely wrote him as a Sagittarian. And as everyone knows, Sagittarians are fun and wonderful people, full of vigor and honesty and good will. *ahem* I really am not prejudiced at all.

So if you like reading retellings of fairy tales (which I've done a lot of lately), you might want to try this one. This one is an adult book, but clean and fun and fast paced.

Enjoy!

Co-authoring

Writing a novel can be rewarding, but alone, it is hard, stressful work—all the plot threads, characters, techniques, rules, research to keep track of—round after round of edits. Imagine if you could clone yourself. Your clone will flush out your hazy ideas, break through the frustrations of writer’s block, and edit while you sleep.




Or you could find a co-author—someone who thinks and writes like you, enjoys the same books, gives you the best comments when they beta-read your work, and is as dedicated to the journey of writing as you are.



Step One – Set the Ground Rules
But writers are a sensitive bunch, and a joint project can deteriorate into chaos. To avoid destroying a friendship or the next best seller, determine your rules of operation before diving into writing:

1. Set deadlines for each phase of the project. Or agree not to have deadlines and to let the project take as long as it needs. When co-authoring with a serious writer, your writing partner may have other projects in the works. Make a pact that this be the stress-free fun project.

2. Control your source file. Sending a document through email can get confusing, and you may end up with multiple copies in varying stages of development. Decide beforehand how you will manage this.

3. Plan how to settle arguments. Mutual respect and understanding can solve many problems, but for the unsolvable, hold a coin toss or leave things unchanged until a solution can be found.

4. Agree to compromise and to have a good attitude. Remember that nobody “owns” the project.



Step Two – Brainstorming
Start a document with headers for each character, for the world building, and for the plot points. Mark your name as you leave comments to allow for conversations within the document. Pass this document back and forth until you have explored every subject and idea.



The following example describes a Lizard Man for a middle-grade novel I'm working on with Wendy Swore:

What are his special abilities?

Writer One: I imagine him to be cold blooded and able to blend in well to his surroundings. I’m not sure that he’s a chameleon so much; just that he’s so cold and mottled that no one would notice he’s a man.

Writer Two: On top of the ability to hide, he should be able to move without making a sound. Perhaps he can walk on walls and ceilings. He likely has a great deal of strength and can jump great distances.




Step Three – Plotting
Once you have flushed out the story, pull your ideas into a chapter synopsis. The following describes how two brothers will meet the Lizard Man:

Chapter One

Bullies toss Tsol’s journal over a fence and into a hedge maze. When Deen races to get it, Tsol hangs back. He does not break rules since being near-perfect seems the way to get adults to leave him alone. He is a naturally inverted kid who knows adults don’t appreciate his imaginative ideas. He prefers his books and experiments to people. But when Deen doesn’t return, Tsol must climb the fence to find his brother.




Step Four – Writing
Following this pattern, the clones can create a first draft containing both writer’s styles and ideas threaded throughout the story:

1. Writer One writes the first chapter and passes it to Writer Two.

2. Writer Two edits the first chapter, writes the second chapter, and then passes it to Writer One.

3. Writer One reviews changes to the first chapter, edits the second chapter, writes the third chapter, and passes it to Writer Two.



Step Five – Editing
“Track Changes” is your friend. You can add comments and discussions, additions and deletions until each writer is happy with every word. Keep an open mind, and don’t marry yourself to the parts you wrote. For two styles to come together, neither one can dominate.



When editing, watch for consistency errors. Writer One pictures a scene one way, but Writer Two describes a completely different room. Or Writer Two adds a side character, and Writer One drops the character from the story.



Ending Thoughts
Sometimes, in the endless turmoil of being a writer, you need a fun project. For me, this is the best way to do it. Have fun!
 
And don't forget to tell me about your co-authoring projects!

50% February Sales Will Be Donated to St Jude

Death and I shared a complicated history. During most of my seventeen years of life, it had followed me like a shadow I couldn’t outrun. Its icy fingers had closed around me more than once, but each time, I narrowly escaped. Even thinking about those encounters chilled my soul, but something always intervened. I survived. Not without more than my fair share of scares, though, and the knowledge that every second is precious.

Some sense of foreboding accompanied my dark thoughts, and apprehension haunted me as I stepped from the limo into the balmy Florida heat. The humidity caused my robin-blue gown to cling to my skeletal frame like shrink-wrap. My bald, scarred head was covered by a wig, perfectly styled and immune to the hot, sticky air.

Tall, slender palm trees swayed in the breeze as Nikki and I wove our way from the parking lot and into the hotel’s crowded lobby. Tonight would be perfect. It had to be—because tonight would be the highlight of my short life.
— excerpt from “Kiss of Death” by Lani Woodland and Melonie Piper, one story in Transcendent: Tales of the Paranormal

Much like the character in this excerpt, there are children and teenagers who live with pain every day, their bodies riddled with illness. Browsing the St Jude site, I am mesmerized by the smiling faces of the small patients. My own girls are running around the house, dancing and laughing. I can’t imagine watching my child go through something like this. I don’t WANT to imagine it. But for some parents, that is not an option.


If there is one thing I want as a writer and publisher, it is the opportunity to be generous. With February being the month of love, Robot Playground Inc will donate 50% net profits (minimum $30) from February sales to St. Jude Children’s Research Hospital.


The benefit on the lives of others:

• $30 can help provide a St. Jude family with meals for one day.
• $100 can help provide one pair of pediatric crutches.
• $140 can help provide two platelet count tests.
• $500 can help provide two transfusion units of red blood cells.
• $1,000 can help provide two days of oxygen.
• $1,500 can help provide a day of chemotherapy.
• $4,000 can help provide a day of outpatient care.


These sales can be eBook or paperback, from Amazon or B&N. Purchase for yourself or as a gift. The more you buy, the more we can give.

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Kindle: $2.99
Nook: $2.99





Skyscraper by Demi Lovato

I've listened to this song about a hundred times this last week. In May, I'll be dancing to this song for recital...along with one of my daughters and several other grade-school-age girls.

When I started listening, it was just a song I needed to learn, but after I've listened to these words again and again, they've taken on a much deeper meaning to me.

Any kind of artist must be willing to bear their souls...like a skyscraper ravaged by the winds, its windows torn out. You have to let go of people's opinions and be willing to pour your heart out.

No matter how the world and life and the struggle to become a successful writer tears me apart, I will not falter. I will rise up. I will keep writing and bearing my soul.

I hope you enjoy this song as much as I do, and when you've listened to it one time, listen just once more.

Congratulations to 24 winners!


Robot Playground Inc is happy to announce the winners to the Transcendent Giveaway.

Kidlets #1 & #2 & #3 picked out the winning numbers, and whenever I told them the names of their picks, they got all excited. I heard a lot of "That's the best name!"

You all made three little girls very happy for an hour.











Candie L. won the Grand Prize Paranormal Survival Package:
  • the movie Beastly in DVD or Blu-Ray (winner's choice)
  • candy & popcorn (can't watch a movie without snacks)
  • paperback copy of Transcendent
  • eBook copy of Tears

Ashley Lavering won the second prize: paperback Transcendent: Tales of the Paranormal


Szabina won the third prize:  paperback Tears by Rita J Webb


Trasina won the fourth prize:  paperback anthology Unlocked: Ten "Key" Tales edited by Wendy Swore and Rita J Webb


Kelly won the fifth prize: eBook Intrinsical by Lani Woodland


Gwen won the sixth prize: eBook When Kyle Comes Back by Melanie Marks


Jennifer K Clark won the seventh prize: eBook Possession by Elana Johnson


Maegan Morin won the eighth prize: eBook Sapphire Flute and eBook The Armor of Light by Karen E Hoover


Kristin Feliz won the ninth prize: eBook The Misadventures of a Teenage Wizard: Two Souls are Better Than One by Karen E Hoover


Donna K Weaver won the tenth prize: eBook Blank Slate by Heather Justesen


Jaclyn won the eleventh prize: eBook Bound by C. K. Bryant


Teressa Oliver won the twelfth prize: eBook Season of Sacrifice by Tristi Pinkston


Gena Robertson won the thirteenth prize: paperback Watched by Cindy M Hogan


Christine Jensen won the fourteenth prize: eBook Watched by Cindy M Hogan


Heidi Noel won the fifteenth prize: eBook Wings of Light by Laura Bingham


Desi won the sixteenth prize: paperback The Peasant Queen by Cheri Chesley


Melissa Haggerty won the seventeenth prize: eBook The Wild Queen by Cheri Chesley


Lucia won the eighteenth prize: eBook Exiled by Rachelle Workman


Dacie won the nineteenth prize: eBook Become by Ali Cross


Francesca won the twentieth prize: ANOTHER eBook copy of Become by Ali Cross


Reagan Walsh won the twenty-first prize: eBook copy of Totally Cliché by Kasey Tross, Debra Erfert, Cathy Witbeck, & More


Eileen won the twenty-second prize: eBook copy of Four Houses by Tori Scott


Lisa won the twenty-third prize: eBook copy of Darkspell by Elizabeth Mueller


Aanchal won the twenty-fourth prize: eBook copy of Vampire Rules by K.C. Blake

Transcendent Giveaway

*drumroll* *trumpet fanfare* *shouts from a cheering crowd*

Robot Playground Inc is happy to announce the Great and Marvelous Transcendent Giveaway












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  • Deadline: midnight EST January 15, 2012
  • Drawing will be held the following week. Winners will be announced by January 22, 2012.
  • Each winner will receive one of the many prizes listed below.
  • For other chances to win prizes, visit the blog Goddess of the Corn or the Unlocking Books Discussion Group


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Prizes:
Grand Prize Paranormal Survival Package:
  • the movie Beastly in DVD or Blu-Ray (winner's choice)
  • candy & popcorn (can't watch a movie without snacks)
  • paperback copy of Transcendent
  • eBook copy of Tears





OKAY, so that is the grand prize; now on to the rest of the prizes. And more prizes will be added before the giveaway is over.

Second Prize:  paperback Transcendent: Tales of the Paranormal


Third Prize:  paperback Tears by Rita J Webb


Fourth Prize:  paperback anthology Unlocked: Ten "Key" Tales edited by Wendy Swore and Rita J Webb




Fifth Prize: eBook Intrinsical by Lani Woodland



Sixth Prize: eBook When Kyle Comes Back by Melanie Marks



Seventh Prize: eBook Possession by Elana Johnson


Eighth Prize: eBook Sapphire Flute and eBook The Armor of Light by Karen E Hoover

   

Ninth Prize: eBook The Misadventures of a Teenage Wizard: Two Souls are Better Than One by Karen E Hoover



Tenth Prize: eBook Blank Slate by Heather Justesen



Eleventh Prize: eBook Bound by C. K. Bryant



Twelfth Prize: eBook Season of Sacrifice by Tristi Pinkston



Thirteenth Prize: paperback Watched by Cindy M Hogan




Fourteenth Prize: eBook Watched by Cindy M Hogan



Fifteenth Prize: eBook Wings of Light by Laura Bingham



Sixteenth Prize: paperback The Peasant Queen by Cheri Chesley


Seventeenth Prize: eBook The Wild Queen by Cheri Chesley


Eighteenth Prize: eBook Exiled by Rachelle Workman


Nineteenth Prize: eBook Become by Ali Cross


Twentieth Prize: ANOTHER eBook copy of Become by Ali Cross



Twenty-first Prize: eBook copy of Totally Cliché by Kasey Tross, Debra Erfert, Cathy Witbeck, & More



Twenty-second Prize: eBook copy of Four Houses by Tori Scott



Twenty-third Prize: eBook copy of Darkspell by Elizabeth Mueller



Twenty-fourth Prize: eBook copy of Vampire Rules by K.C. Blake

Purchase Information:
Paperback on Amazon: Purchase Now for $10.99!
Kindle: Purchase today for $2.99!
Nook: Purchase today for $2.99!